I was able to
teach my 2nd grade students about personal narratives while also
connecting with their cultural backgrounds. I showed the students a slide show of
pictures from my trip at Mt. Takao – a famous mountain in the Tokyo region – as
I read my personal narrative about my climb up the mountain. I wanted my
personal narrative to focus on a small moment I have had here in Japan so that
my students could connect with my experience. About half of the students in the
class are Japanese students, while the remaining are half Japanese/ White, half
Japanese/ half African, and White. The topic of Mt. Takao connected with the
students’ cultural backgrounds because students could see pictures of the
mountain’s beautiful landscape and religious shrines that are part of Japan’s
narrative. Japanese students were able to see their own cultural practices,
while the international students were able to learn about them.
As I showed
students the slideshow of pictures, I read them my personal narrative. One of my
objectives for the lesson was for students to demonstrate understanding that a
personal narrative is an entertaining experience that happened in the past,
consisting of different events. Students were able to directly visualize the
events in my narrative – the start of my climb, the shrines, the statues, and
finally the view at the top. Another objective of my lesson was for students to
identify “showing” vs. “telling” language in my narrative. I wrote sentences
such as “the sun’s rays made the trail even glow,” and “My legs were suddenly
able to switch from walking to running!” Students were able to recognize that
in the former sentence, instead of simply writing “the weather was nice,” I
showed that the weather was nice by describing what the sun made the mountain
look like. In the latter sentence, identified that I was showing my new energy
for climbing the mountain, without just saying “I had more energy.”
One of my
favorite examples of showing language was that “Statues of different deities
stared directly at me.” When I read students this, I showed them a picture of
the statues. Some students smiled because they recognized the cultural
significance of the statues, while some asked questions regarding what a deity
is. I asked students, “Can statues really stare at you?” I told students that I
wrote the statues stared at me in order to show how I believed that they were
somehow telling me to persevere up the mountain. Students were able to grasp
that descriptive language is about showing one’s feelings and even breaking
away from reality. After the lesson, students started writing their own
personal narratives with descriptive language. I was pleased that one student
wrote that he “felt like a fish” and “was in a blue world.” I could tell that
the student was describing how he felt in water with making comparisons and describing
the scene outside just telling his reader that he was in water. The students
overall achieved the objectives of my lesson and were excited to write their
own personal narratives. I’m excited to see what they’ll have accomplished at
my next visit!